New Journalism Demands a New Voice
Posted on 08. Mar, 2009 by Collin Orcutt in Shifting Journalism
A friend pointed me to Ben McGrath’s recent article in The New Yorker titled “Roid Warriors” a few days ago. The article is about the New York Daily News’ I-Team, an investigative sports unit that finds itself digging up steroid scandals more and more lately.
I ran into the same friend the next day, and she asked me how I liked the piece. I replied that it was interesting enough, but I thought the writing was stereotypical print style and that it didn’t do much for me. “How so?” she asked. The best way I could think to respond was with an analogy:
If a middle school teacher asks their class to draw an apple, what will the majority of the apples look like? Probably most will look like a red delicious: bright red coloring, a cleft at the base, and a slightly curved stem with maybe a leaf or two sprouting from the top. That’s how the article read to me, as unsurprising as the typical red delicious.
Don’t get me wrong, the reporting in the piece was solid, and the point of the article was surely to make the I-Team’s story the focus. But I’ve realized in the last few months that, due mostly to the proliferation of blogs I read, I have come to not only enjoy but also to expect a voice and an opinion in sports articles.
That seems to be the big difference between the net and the printed page: people get to be their own columnist online. Generalization, sure, but I believe there’s warrant to it. What I’m finding troublesome, though, is when writers I would classify as “print writers” convert to the online world and bring their newspaperman voice with them.
What do I mean by newspaperman voice? The type of writing that makes you think of trench coats, typewriters, kitschy headlines, and newspaper bundles tied with twine. The type of writing that smells faintly of ink and printing presses. The type of writing that has become so standard it can be called a “type of writing.”
Rick Reilly’s a perfect example. He’s still print guy per say, with a column that appears in ESPN The Mag, but, like his supposed nemesis Bill Simmons, he writes for the website between magazine articles.
The problem is, his website postings are just the same as his magazine pieces (something he said he would do from the start). For example, this is from his latest “Life of Reilly” post about cheap ticket options as a result of the bad economy:
Sure, times are rougher than Russian toilet paper. Your 401K is now a 101k. Donald Trump just laid off three blow-dryists. But because of it, you can see great sporting events for the price of a can of Spam Lite!
Some fans with season tickets can’t afford the parking, the $7 Cokes or even the razor to shave beforehand. They’re dumping them like AIG stock on places like StubHub.com and eBay. I have a friend who got two tickets to the Orange Bowl this year, plus parking, for $10. That’s cheaper than an actual bowl of oranges!
Rougher than Russian toilet paper. Cheaper than an actual bowl of oranges. Just a graf later, he uses the word “loaf.” All that’s missing is a “gee-williker” and a glass bottle of Coca Cola.
I liked Rick Reilly’s writing growing up. I was never lucky enough to have a subscription to SI, so trips to the dentist became crash reading sessions of as many back pages as I could finish before my check-up. I found his stuff is clever in a pull a quarter from behind your ear way — much cooler before you figure out the trick. But a lot has changed since my dentist reading days — especially in the journalism world. So why not Reilly’s style? His print stuff can stay the same, that makes sense. But couldn’t he at least use his online platform for something a little different?
Jay Mariotti is kind of a similar case. His style has always been a little more progressive (aggressive?) than the traditional print style. He was an outspoken columnist while at the Chicago Sun Times, and he remains an outspoken columnist at AOL’s Fanhouse. But he hasn’t taken advantage of what the internet can offer, either. If you were reading closely enough, perhaps you could have seen that coming–in his inaugural post, he hinted that the only real change would be the process:
The difference is, the column won’t go through the 20th-century, ink-and-newsprint monkey grind where you hope the truck driver doesn’t stop at Dunkin’ Donuts and the delivery boy doesn’t hit your dog on the ass. The column simply will go from my computer to an editor to you.
Mariotti’s articles read like big print pieces, right down to the way he uses quotes, often taking them from press conferences broadcast on TV and throwing them in his piece like he reported it.
Let me be clear, I don’t have a problem with a “print voice.” Although it may not be my preferred style, I understand that newspapers and those who wrote for them shaped the sports journalism world of today.
It’s simply that, in this time, newspapers have been confronted by the internet, and they are losing. To think that you can dump print content online and just keep on going may be exactly why journalism is having such a hard time marketing itself today.
It’s no longer just a print world. Perhaps it’s time for something more than a print voice.



Carla
08. Mar, 2009
I like the writing in this post. My question though, is, what does the online voice sound like? Because it seems the columnists above have voices–you just don’t like ‘em. Or maybe you don’t like that they’re old and they sound that way.
I tend to think online writing is best when it’s slightly informal-sounding. I agree: I don’t like when pubs just wholesale transport their print content online, as if, even though the content had to be married to paper, it also doesn’t need to be adapted to the new medium.
This post brought up something else… how is our generation and those succeeding being retrained to process news?
Good post.
Collin Orcutt
09. Mar, 2009
What an online voice sounds like is a good question. I’m not sure there’s a stock answer–the internet is still fairly new as far as the journalism world goes. It’s stereotyped as over-opinionated and unnecessarily critical at times, but not all of it is.
What the internet offers, though, is the chance to do something new. Expand your voice, change your style, test out new methods, write short, write long. Whatever you do, do something. Throwing print content online and adding a slideshow doesn’t make it web savvy.
It’s not that I don’t like the voices of Mariotti and Reilly, it’s just that I want more from them. They are like all columnists in that they have their own style and it’s a personal preference as to whether or not you like that style. I find their voices a little old school for my taste (and often find myself shaking my head at some of their punch lines), but my major qualms have to do with their lack of online progress.
Mike P
09. Mar, 2009
Good post Collin and good comment, Carla. I think both of you are right in that the “online voice” is generally considered to be slightly informal, and perhaps, more prone to hyperbole than what you’d see in a newspaper.
But my take on this just that those guys may be very set in their ways. The medium they’re writing for isn’t going to change what they write or how they write it. Call them “old school” or “dinosaurs”, but I think that’s the issue at base. A lot of sports reporters (those who came up in print, that is) tend to have rather large nostalgic streaks, and I think that shines through with these guys.
In contrast, you look at something like Deadspin or With Leather and you’ll quickly see that nothing is sacred or above ridicule. I’m not saying that’s a bad thing. The general informality of the internet is perfect for witty repartee and that fits the audience that probably gets its sports news from the web in the first place, so so much the better.
Maybe it’s because I feel like I’ve been immersed in blogs so long, but I don’t think I can point to an example of something that is purely of the net that has a truly unique sounding voice. I love Talking Points Memo for its conversational style and it was probably groundbreaking when it first came on the scene, but now, to me, it just another feed in my RSS reader (though it’s one I check all the time). Your best “voices” on the net, I think, still come from folks like Andrew Sullivan who really use their blogs as places to hash it all out. Sullivan is not putting finished product on the web for the most part; if you want his deeply considered thoughts in their most polished form, you pick up that month’s Atlantic. If you want to see the train wreck inner working of his brain, you go to the blog, because he’s push half formed arguments about major issues next to links of weird YouTube mashups. That’s what keeps me going back to his site. Sometimes I want to strangle the guy, other times he can state something so well that I want to just give up writing altogether because I know I’ll never bring it like that. But it’s the sheer unpredictability of it all that makes it all interesting and perhaps using the internet as the canvas is the best way to find a voice…throw it all up there until you find what works for you.
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